Frightful Appearance

Frightful appearance

covers my eyes

when waking up

 I am left unsirprised

 

Paint a vivid expression

of one who cries

who's everyday life

is unpleasent skies

 

Through her eyes

the world it shines

covering her cries

and scares her with tides

Author's Note

nmother fucking 2 am

Reviews

[light and ashes]

This reminds me of me, hang in there. One day there will be a change in the weather :]

[daydreamer]

nice write. short and sweet. emotions have been captured excellent good work keep it up.

[Leslie Philibert]

Like the use of language,lots of neat expressions like unpleasant skies (I`ve never heard of skies being unpleasant - that`s new !) and scares her with tides is good too.Good work.

[Chris]

chuckling here... quite the note... I can and do appreciate THAT.

ever really watch your 'other' as they sleep? I mean seriously just lay there and focus on them... on the movements, the settlings... how they breathe... how they awaken... as they become aware... as they realize you're there watching...

and that first kiss - BEFORE they can do A N Y T H I N G ...

2AM isn't so bad then.

Chris