Taken Blur

Shunning accepting

make your glitter wish

old broken taverns

but are you missing this

 

high mountain high

flow river flow

gold road triggers

our memories past

 

boulder large boulder

always gets in my way

i make what i can

but there is alwyays a price to pace

 

inked beauty

covered her life with stars

to forget the past

which was written on her arms

 

SuperNova Pretty Star

Full of light

makes a thought

in the dark of night

 

Broken memories

of a past once lived

the one i wish to forget

the pain is fresh and new

as are the scars

 

Painful memories

break me apart

leave me tattered

and shattered like glass

 

Memories Memories

please go away

my thoughts used to be happy

until you came to stay

 

Memories Memories

you a blur and haze

I dont want

anymore days

 

Thoughtless Vengence

of a life once lived

hazey memory

flux with flow

 

In these lost memories

im walking in a blur

With the frame and focus

close at heart

just waiting to capture

amoment that wont hurt

 

 

Author's Note

A poem i wrote these when im tired so if they dont make sence my bad also sorry 4 grammer imma to lazy 2 fix it and tired -_-

Reviews

[Caitlyn Murray]

I llove it! Great job

[Kaitlynn A. Black]

What this poem is telling me, is that something good, brought back something bad and now that the bad is back in place, it makes life worse. My question, why not go back to the good? Rather than living in memories bad?

[Chris]

First - stop apologizing for being you. You ARE allowed to be you - the person you are, AS you are.

Second - I paused here because I wanted to - not had to. I'm taking the time (my time) to say I understand - in my mind anyway, what it is you are expressing.

You're worth listening to AND being heard.


Take care,
Chris