Monster Mahiem

Forgotten Nightmare Haunts Again

Only at night in my dreams but it all depends

Scattered puzzle pieces

dance among waves

 

voices whisper hush hush

dont be afraid

tick tock of the clock

it chimes to fly

wish one more time because

you stuck every time

 

Thoughtful thinker

Stay with her to night

make her belive

one day she will be aright

 

Nightmare Monster

leave her be

she doesn't need your madness

she alreasdy has me

 

Leave her tonight

let her dream in peace

she is scared and upset

of those thoughts she recieves

Stop the madness

leave her in the darkness alone

stop changing her mind

she is tired of waking up at home

 

Leave her be she just wants to be free

She is wishing for light

and then with wings she takes flight

you grasping her ankles

with a ball and chain

she is tired of playing

this isnt her only game

 

she cries to the heavens

for one more chance

wishes on time

she justs her last dance

 

an angel of light flies from the rooftops

she is tired of watching this young girl be played

and watching her sadness become more everyday

 

Go away demons

you price has been payes

she has suffred enough

without you at the aid

Stay out of her head

stay out of her mind

no more thoughts of death

realease all the binds

leave her be

she has been tortured enough

she has learned already

no more strength left to be tough

Her dreams were her serenity

I guess you took that too

 

 

Nightmare Monster This isn't her game

This wasnt her fault now let her wake

She is tired of waiting

and waking up crying

you took her last

she was already dying

 

I am her Angel

I watch with a close eye

dont you dare take a step forward

i will be here everytime

I'm sick of watching her lose her wings

by the cause of you

she is done tired

And has forgotten by the hands of you

 

I Am her Angel

I will stay close

I won't let you hurt her

this was the most

I will be here

I'm not letting her die

I will wait for the day her

Wings will learn to fly

 

Author's Note

This was based on my nightmare i have been having for the past 3 months it comes back everytime
about halfway through i made a reference with angelinks poem angel sitting on the rooftop except she makes a different choice and helps a girl with her suffereing I hope you enjoy it

Reviews

[light and ashes]

Wow....I love this poem so much. I have really awful nightmares or night terrors too sometimes. One of the first poems that I wrote on this site is about nightmares. Actually its called "Nightmares" if you would like to check it out from curiosity. I am so glad that my poem "Angel sitting on the rooftop of an abonded building" got to be the positive part of a terrible nightmare. If your having the same nightmare a lot then it probably means something. I like to look up my some of the symbols from my nightmares on dreamdictionary.com to see if I can figure out what is bothering me or what I can possibly do to help myself. Maybe you should start doing that too. It might could help you. Keep up the awesome writing. This poem is beautiful and hang in there girly :) If you ever want to talk about anything at all you can always message me. I would be happy to help in any way possible.

[stars are far]

nice one ...
well done :)

[anaisbelieve]

Nightmare Monster
leave her be
she doesn't need your madness
she alreasdy has me


that's my favorite part.

[Mari-Sweet]

Dark but interesting images.

[daydreamer]

good write. yup a constant struggle between good and evil thoughts have been nicely wriiten.Good work:)

[Inyourshadow]

This is deeply emotional and bitter sweet, you have a real flair for the dramatic and the ending really struck a cord with me as my name on here is a promise to one of my friends, we all need someone to watch over us at times. Keep em' coming

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Slender wording leaves the reader, oblivious to the clear message you are trying to convery, the dream like quality is almost to severe.

[Dove]

Kind of reminded me of a melody. Its really nice.

[Wolfwind]

A couple of things first...
"you stuck every time" I think you meant to say "your"
"Stay with her to night" I think you meant to say "tonight"
"she alreasdy has me" I think you meant "already"

This peace has a underlying fear through out. It's as if there is some issue the young girl is going through that is oppressing and or caging her from being who she is and the guardian angel seems to be the solution.

As this piece comes from a dream, these images could mean a variety of different things. I'm not really into dream meanings, but I would think there is certainly something amiss in that is causing a sense of fear.

I love the flow and imagery of the piece and it keeps the reader following along till the end.

Great Ink!
Aaron

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This was an exceptional write! You words played out like a song in my head... a haunting melody with great rhythmic flow... Great Job!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Words of sadness, but help on the way from an angel! I truely believe we each have a Gaurdian Angel watching overs us!