Monster Mahiem

Monster Mahiem

A Poem by paradise

Forgotten Nightmare Haunts Again

Only at night in my dreams but it all depends

Scattered puzzle pieces

dance among waves

 

voices whisper hush hush

dont be afraid

tick tock of the clock

it chimes to fly

wish one more time because

you stuck every time

 

Thoughtful thinker

Stay with her to night

make her belive

one day she will be aright

 

Nightmare Monster

leave her be

she doesn't need your madness

she alreasdy has me

 

Leave her tonight

let her dream in peace

she is scared and upset

of those thoughts she recieves

Stop the madness

leave her in the darkness alone

stop changing her mind

she is tired of waking up at home

 

Leave her be she just wants to be free

She is wishing for light

and then with wings she takes flight

you grasping her ankles

with a ball and chain

she is tired of playing

this isnt her only game

 

she cries to the heavens

for one more chance

wishes on time

she justs her last dance

 

an angel of light flies from the rooftops

she is tired of watching this young girl be played

and watching her sadness become more everyday

 

Go away demons

you price has been payes

she has suffred enough

without you at the aid

Stay out of her head

stay out of her mind

no more thoughts of death

realease all the binds

leave her be

she has been tortured enough

she has learned already

no more strength left to be tough

Her dreams were her serenity

I guess you took that too

 

 

Nightmare Monster This isn't her game

This wasnt her fault now let her wake

She is tired of waiting

and waking up crying

you took her last

she was already dying

 

I am her Angel

I watch with a close eye

dont you dare take a step forward

i will be here everytime

I'm sick of watching her lose her wings

by the cause of you

she is done tired

And has forgotten by the hands of you

 

I Am her Angel

I will stay close

I won't let you hurt her

this was the most

I will be here

I'm not letting her die

I will wait for the day her

Wings will learn to fly

 

© 2011 paradise


Author's Note

paradise
This was based on my nightmare i have been having for the past 3 months it comes back everytime
about halfway through i made a reference with angelinks poem angel sitting on the rooftop except she makes a different choice and helps a girl with her suffereing I hope you enjoy it

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Wow....I love this poem so much. I have really awful nightmares or night terrors too sometimes. One of the first poems that I wrote on this site is about nightmares. Actually its called "Nightmares" if you would like to check it out from curiosity. I am so glad that my poem "Angel sitting on the rooftop of an abonded building" got to be the positive part of a terrible nightmare. If your having the same nightmare a lot then it probably means something. I like to look up my some of the symbols from my nightmares on dreamdictionary.com to see if I can figure out what is bothering me or what I can possibly do to help myself. Maybe you should start doing that too. It might could help you. Keep up the awesome writing. This poem is beautiful and hang in there girly :) If you ever want to talk about anything at all you can always message me. I would be happy to help in any way possible.


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i can relate!its wonderful& monster let her be!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow....I love this poem so much. I have really awful nightmares or night terrors too sometimes. One of the first poems that I wrote on this site is about nightmares. Actually its called "Nightmares" if you would like to check it out from curiosity. I am so glad that my poem "Angel sitting on the rooftop of an abonded building" got to be the positive part of a terrible nightmare. If your having the same nightmare a lot then it probably means something. I like to look up my some of the symbols from my nightmares on dreamdictionary.com to see if I can figure out what is bothering me or what I can possibly do to help myself. Maybe you should start doing that too. It might could help you. Keep up the awesome writing. This poem is beautiful and hang in there girly :) If you ever want to talk about anything at all you can always message me. I would be happy to help in any way possible.


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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wow! an intense dream to have over and over. there is undoubtedly a reason for it's reoccurence. some important lesson being over looked, perhaps??

Posted 12 Years Ago


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:} it's good. :}

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vivid imagery, nicely done. Well written.


Great write.
~Anna Rose

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Wow. Amazing imagery :) Amazing write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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We all need a scary a*s kicking asses and taking names kind of angel and you reminded us of that. Great job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Our nightmares are one of the only things we own... we earn them.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You paint a vivid scene love..truly!
This is alarming as well as intriguing :)
Such detail, superb love xoxo

Posted 12 Years Ago


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