Lust Garden

They say A rose always  represents love

But why a rose

Roses start off pretty and frresh

until time starts to pass

 

Roses die and wither

They turn grey and petals fall

 

Love starts off pretty and new

It gets old and confusing

 

Thus love must die too?

Author's Note

Wrote this 2 yrs ago and edited it

Reviews

[Annie]

Wow! I love this, short but succinct and just plain amazing. Well done!!

[johnnyqueer]

If you hang them up-side down, and spray them with perfume they can last a long time. I enjoyed this comparison, well written :)

[Chris]

Roses weather many seasons and return and grow... new and expanded growth from the old paths. Life and living takes effort and care.

Chris

[Bridgette's Ink]

I love how you can make a short simple poem unfold into a more complex and vivid one. Thoroughly enjoyed.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

amazing

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

amazing

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

amazing

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

amazing

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

amazing

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

amazing