Compartment 114
Compartment 114
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Heartless Vengence

Heartless Vengence

A Poem by paradise

Baby What the f**k

your bitching and moaning

you won't say a f*****g thing

I'm trying to help you but you won't

let me in.

 

Baby what the f**k you are ruining her life

she's stuck she's gonna drown

you just leave her to suffer

and watch her wear a frown

 

She's crying for you

you ignore it.

She's screaming for you to help her

You give her a emotionless stare

 

You go and give her heart away

tell her it was already broken

so it couldn't stay

 

She told you it was fragile

it could break like glass

might have so scars

and was already in half

 

no you said i can't fix you

I broke it

it shattered

I didn't dare touch the pieces

they would be sharp

 

I don't want to get cut

trying to help you

its not me who's in this

fix it yourself

 

She tried, she tried so hard

She cut herself trying

she cried her tears trying

she faught to put it together

it was impossible

 

You gave her nothing

but bruises and scars

making her believe

together you'll go far

 

you watched her scream

as darkness overwhelemed you

And left purple and black

all over her

 

You watched her

kill herself for you

 

But the best thing is

you didn't even know it was hurting her

© 2011 paradise


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This is amazing. It reminds me of Coldplay's Fix You. You should listen to it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow this was very powerful but it made me cry .... its sad when someone is hurting because of love and its even worse when the other person doesnt even realize...great piece

Posted 13 Years Ago



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