Breathe In Air

You are my sweet tooth

I crave you like candy

Like I want bubble gum

and your kiss of brandy

The way I want chocolate

I need your love

And that last wish on a star

I want your lasting hug

When the sunset ends

I want a pretty picture

That shows us togetherforever

Then I'll know its now pretend.

 

So take a walk with me in the moonlight

hold my hand

you'll tell me im beautiful

but it doesn't sound  bland

sit with me by the ocean shore

tracing my leg with ur finger giving me chills

Holding me closer our feets dance with waves

Oh baby you make small things thrills

Making me do somthing stupid teaching me to be brave

Sitting under a tree

smiling at me

telling me "Baby Were Free"

and then placing a hand on my knee

Kissing me softly

holding me close

Running your hand through my  hair

as the wind blows

I breathe in  air

its freash and new

It sings to me softly

and I know its all about you

 

And baby let me tell you

I crave you.......

I want you..........

I need you.........

I love you.........

 

I crave your last touch

And love the way you smile

I need you to last baby

you know me too well

And baby just let me say

I want you forever

I won't let you stray

Cuz baby your my everything

And your my perfect half in everyway

 

 

Author's Note

ahh i kinna like this one :P

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This sounds like "True Love"- very heartfelt. A vivid and refreshing image of "new love." Great write!

[Mari-Sweet]

I love this poem. The romance on the beach is so beautiful. You really paint a picture for the reader.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Great emotional feel to it, very well written!

[J.V. Stanley]

A wonderful tribute to the one that you love, its amazing the deep and boundless emotion that comes along with truly loving someone and how that inspiration kind of rules over us. Its abounding with such great images, and its very very sweet.

Running your hand through my hair
as the wind blows
I breathe in air
its freash and new
It sings to me softly
and I know its all about you

This is probably my favorite part of this poem, and I love the lines, beautifully written

[daydreamer]

this appears to be a beautiful romantic song.good one:)

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

This reads to me like it could be a song. Very lyrical. Wonderfully written, nicely done.