Insanity Escape

In a small  white room

Four walls and a door

Theres a girl crying softly

on the cold floor

 

Her insanity drove her

to the unknown

I tried to save her

But she wouldn't go home

 

Angels and demons

Battle for her soul

Killing her  inside

she doesn't feel whole

 

her hair is in tangles

her eyes blood red

she is weeping softly

the demons got to her head

 

 

A small white room

Four walls a door

Drives her insine

And tempts her more

 

Pacing softy

side ti side

She wanders father

Insanity's inside

 

She battles alone

She won't let you in

Torn broken wings

from demons who win

 

She feels her feathers softly

handles with care

makes sure their pretty

then soars through the air

 

There in thecorner

My broken angel dies

Nobody could help her

they ignored her cries

Reviews

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Wonderful rhythm and flow. I see a few minor errors like "side ti side" - i assume should be 'side to side' and father should be 'farther'. Now that I feel like a grammar spelling nazi, lol I thought this was a great write!