Marionette Deciever

This is a Poem :D

 

There was a time when my life
was considered as perfect
I had hurt so long I though
it was worth it.

I could smile and laugh
tricking them all
whoever thought one word
would make me fall

Now I'm speechless
I choose not to talk.
and asI leave the class
It's hard for me to walk.

Only few know what
I'm going through
So please don't ask
I'm not telling you

When someone asks
"Are You Okay?"
"No Just Tired"
It gets hard keeping them at bay

I didn't want
my parents to know
But Now ladies and Gentlemen
Your welcome to the Show

I know your concerned
about me not eating
But thats not the part
of me that needs healing

Then I am asked
Black or White
But that is like asking
Wrong or Right

This is my answer
"I Am Grey"
And here's to the things
I can't say.

The key to my heart
Is Gone
And the girl in the mirror
Couldn't Be More Wrong.

Author's Note

Hope you like it cuz i kinna don't

Reviews

[Inyourshadow]

The end reminds me of one of my own - I saw him today - because the mirror can capture our image but not our pain, they are but a reflection of what others see yet never have truely seen. Beautifully bittersweet and touching, keep em' coming

[SinnerInspired]

Girl how could you not like it, its wonderful

[SinnerInspired]

F*****g love it!! I love the part about black& white right& wrong
Master piece

[StoryTailor]

Wow... you packed a bunch of emotions into this.
It's very beautiful.
THere are a bunch of stanzas that are just-- memorable. Something that clicks I suppose. I loved reading it!

[Egoless]

This is amazing and very emotional. I could easily connect. Beautiful work!

[paradise]

Thanks yous

[PaperDoll]

"This is my answer
"I Am Grey""

These are my favourite lines of this poem. I found it a delightful read, and although I think that the flow falters just slightly in a few places, overall I liked it very much. Nice work. :)

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

it was amazing

[dreaming dame]

? Why not? I found, sorry, find, this aesy to read. And though I don't truly know what's wrong, I still think the ending is satisfying. :)

[Dreamer_<3]

It made me cry :'( !!!! i loved it !!!!!!! speechless........