Opinionated Occurrence

 

I'll regret it in the morning
The way I looked into your eyes
I'll regret it in the morning
The way I believed all your lies

I'll regret it in the morning
The way I said I Love You
I'll regret it in the morning
When I said F**k You

I'll regret it in the morning
The way I told you goodbye
I'll regret it in the morning
When because of you I cried

I'll regret it in the morning
The way I said too much
I'll regret it in the morning
There was no last touch

I'll regret it in the morning
The way you told me the "joke"
I'll regret it in the morning
The way I thought there was hope

I'll regret it in the morning
The way I let you treat me
I'll regret it in the morning
Because I thought we were meant to be

I'll regret it in the morning
The way I let you apoligize me
I'll regret it in the morning
Because I let you off scott free

Even though I let you get away with a whole bunch of s**t
I never thought it would end up like this
Why was it me who's life is fucked up
But you know I have to do my best to keep my face up

I hate my life and I hate you
I guess I should be glad we are through
Well I'm not Just leave me be
But I F*****g Can't Believe I let you hurt me

Author's Note

La La La La La La La Poemmm

Reviews

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WOW, i loved this, straight to the point and so well expressed.
I have felt like this so many times, I have just lost count.
It seems everybody anymore is out to hurt someone,
It's a sad world today! This write really grapped a hold on me.
More people ought to read this write. LOVE IT!!!!

[Enigma]

A superb blend of mixed emotions of guilt and hatred (can I add, 'indignation'?). Like the last work, even here the repetition of the single line did its magic. Loved the flow. Well done.

[paradise]

Thank you to anyone who reviews this :D Its appreciated

[stars are far]

"I'll regret it in the morning
The way I looked into your eyes
I'll regret it in the morning
The way I believed all your lies

I'll regret it in the morning
The way I said I Love You"

this was amazing those lines i felt in real and im really regreting them ..
great piece :)

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

I can't tell you how many relationships I've had like this. Strong, powerful write. Nicely done!

[Bridgette's Ink]

awww this is great.

[Dove]

Wow i can totally feel the emotion in this and this is an amazing. Very creative. I like it.