Deceitful Reflection

 

Look in the mirror what do you see?
See the silouette an outline of me.
No theres not even a chance I look pretty
Nope none can see how I hurt so badly

Could you believe I once smiled?
Yeah sure that's because I was a child
When you start to open your eyes
It's hate anger and pain you realize

I wish that I never chose him
That is something I wishedI never letbegin
Mistakes hurt pain can't you please go away
I'm begging you please let me me live a day

I want to leave to never come back
Why oh why did I choose this path
Can someone remind me how to breathe in air?
Please someone save me this is too much to bare

Well stupid girl just stop and remember Life's not fair.

Author's Note

Ahh well I wrote this a while agoo sooo yeahhh

Reviews

[Emily Shae]

This is beautiful. The way you've written it to where the rhythm is continuous is well done.

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Life is not fair, that is very true. But even through life's curve balls they are lessons and they make us a better and stronger person. It may not feel like it, but you eventually you'll start to realize that. Great write.

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YES!!! so very true, life is never fair. I lost track of those who have hurt me in the past. Just one day without the rememberance of pain would be so nice. I really liked this, it makes one think before they do. Awesome write!

[paradise]

Thank yous :P

[AllieMarie]

I really like it, the rhyming helped it flow(: