Temptress Desires

Temptress Desires

A Poem by paradise

 
Where are you?

I'm in this darkness and blind,
You told meet you hear one last time
I start to cry.

Where Are You?

You told me to meet you hear by the fire
What happened to that girl that used to insipre.
As I ask myself is he what you desire?

Where are you?

I miss and I wish you were by myside
I am now judged and confused
No friends seen at my right

Where are you?

My once so happy smile has turned to tears
And I have turned into all my fears
You stupid Selfish Foolish Girl
Look at you now not even a twirl.

Where are you?

Now I see You Your eyes with fire
Your grin of hate and lies that tire
I look at you and see your digust
But It's me I can no Longer trust.

© 2011 paradise


Author's Note

paradise
I just added it cuz well its seemed okay ? I guess

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Interesting, I kinda picture a ballerina when I read this

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I absolutely loved this.
Thank's for the good read.(:

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A woman beats herself up because the man she is dependent on with no one else to turn to has abonded her, nice write. This is so sad,lonely,desperate,and helpless.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

thank you I honestly thought uit was my worst one :P

Posted 13 Years Ago


this was so nice
i liked it .. great poem :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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