Masterpiece Mistakes

Smile Quietly My Dear,

Shadow Monsters Are Ever So Near.

 

Silently crying

herslef to sleep

Monsters haunt

Whispering

"Cut Deep."

 

Making her desicion

Between

Wrong and Right

She Hurts Herself

Losing

The Fight

 

Her Battle Scars

Are for all to see

Please don't Judge

Forever They

Will always be

 

The Shadows Follow

No Escape

Getting Harder

A Sad Fate

 

PLease Save Me

From The

Nightmare I've
Become

Slowly Losing Myself

My Momsters Won

Author's Note

Please tell me what you think

Reviews

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Its amazing to me about the darkness of the human mind. As a child, I grew up almost becoming this. I guess you have to have a strong-willed heart to be able to win against the darkness inside your own mind. Thought-provoking, you made me think. Nicely done!

[Casper]

This hit close to home for me. For I know those monsters that you are writing about. Horrible beings. Unrelenting. A nice poem, short, but the message gets across.

[May]

AhMazing

[light and ashes]

Awesome! I love this poem!

[Dreamer_<3]

i have no idea how to explain !!! all i can say is WOW!!!!!!:)

[Egoless]

Great! I think using shorter lines helped to get this message across in a much more powerful way. Nice work!

[Kate Hunter]

well done, SilentlyBeautiful. It was a very raw, touching piece. Keep it up. ^_^

[paradise]

Thank yous toanyone who comments ;d

[Leave me alone....]

love this.

[paradise]

Lol Nice connection :P