Masterpiece Mistakes

Smile Quietly My Dear,

Shadow Monsters Are Ever So Near.

 

Silently crying

herslef to sleep

Monsters haunt

Whispering

"Cut Deep."

 

Making her desicion

Between

Wrong and Right

She Hurts Herself

Losing

The Fight

 

Her Battle Scars

Are for all to see

Please don't Judge

Forever They

Will always be

 

The Shadows Follow

No Escape

Getting Harder

A Sad Fate

 

PLease Save Me

From The

Nightmare I've
Become

Slowly Losing Myself

My Momsters Won

Author's Note

Please tell me what you think

Reviews

[daydreamer]

monsters are there in all of us. we have to battle them everyday. sometimes they win sometimes we do battle goes on. Good write:)

[anaisbelieve]

The quiet whisper of the monster is quite compelling.

[khalid]

so nice so simple

[MetBySunlight]

This is so powerful. I like it! Good job!

[Moonwind Belmont]

ummm...before I comment did you really use the term Momsters or is it a mistake? because my review will depend on it =)

[Luke Ritta]

powerfull images.....good work. well done

[Richard Anthony Goulart]

This is crazy good. I can feel the emotion through this poem.

[ketchup chips]

iiittts so poowerfull. :)