Forgotten Promise

Forgotten Promise

A Poem by paradise

I dare you to
Hurt Me.
To cut
Me Down.

To Ruin
My Life
Make Me
Drown

I Dare You To
B re ak M e
To crush
My H.e.a.r.t

To Make Me
Lose
So i will fall
a P A r T

I Dare You
To Call me
A Witch
To call me
A s**t
And make me
Tw./]It< .ch/

Well I Know You And Your The B***h

© 2011 paradise


Author's Note

paradise
Hmm random but i kinna like it :D

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I do like this poem very much. Don't ever let anyone treat you like dirt not even if you think you will have no one else to turn to because they don't deserve to have you in there life. You are beautiful and have everything that it takes to succeed in all you do. Drink from your own cup of love and give yourself a break when you mess up by remembering that you are human. I hope that God's blessings rain down on you and that you are filled with peace.



Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I say alwsys stay who you are, you get better reception that way. If people don't like it well screw them. You know who you are don't change for anyone. I love the power behind your words. Stand up for what you believe in. I like your amazing writes, you hold talent. Awesome write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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i love this poem and you dont need to be treated bad you are an amazing person and dont forget that...NEVER!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thank you I'm glad you liked it and understood it. I love "Drink from your own cup of love and give yourself a break when you mess up by remembering that you are human" It's a great thing to say. Thank you very much :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


I do like this poem very much. Don't ever let anyone treat you like dirt not even if you think you will have no one else to turn to because they don't deserve to have you in there life. You are beautiful and have everything that it takes to succeed in all you do. Drink from your own cup of love and give yourself a break when you mess up by remembering that you are human. I hope that God's blessings rain down on you and that you are filled with peace.



Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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