Manipulation Moonlight

Manipulation Moonlight

A Poem by paradise
"

To My first who was the worst

"

You said
Forever,
I'll never love
one girl but you.

SadlyI was
a beginner in love
and Thought

it was true

Then there was
A Day I cried

Came Out

Of All My Lies

But no you were
not by myside
You just stood there
with innocent eyes

Completly Oblivious is
how I describe you
You Ignored me for 3 Days
When everyone said little change

No for you it was
too hard to speak up
You just left me there
Nothing to say "Yup"

Well Its Over. F*****g  Done.
I Dont

Want your I Love Yous
Anymore.

No Im serious
Im Done.
And those Empty Promises
I realize were your fun

So give it to a Girl
Who's heart doesnt weigh a Ton
But yeah thats Right
think you've won.

One day
you'll understand real hurt
But Don't stand too close to
the fire your bound to get burnt.

© 2011 paradise


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It sucks to have that happen to you but at the end of the day that's what love is all about. It's about putting your feelings out there for someone and hoping that they feel the same way. And if they don't have the same feelings then it's a lesson learned. But if they claimed to have the same feelings and then went back on thier word then that guys was a piece of s*#t. And deserves to get burnt by the fire.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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wow if he was that big of a jackass then I would just hate to see him. But after a few months or so I would just try to become friends because we're only human, right?

Posted 12 Years Ago


It sucks to have that happen to you but at the end of the day that's what love is all about. It's about putting your feelings out there for someone and hoping that they feel the same way. And if they don't have the same feelings then it's a lesson learned. But if they claimed to have the same feelings and then went back on thier word then that guys was a piece of s*#t. And deserves to get burnt by the fire.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love this its a very good dialog of words :D:D xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm so sorry you went through that but this is an amazing poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awhhe thanks and i know i ewas just trying to right a poem and I realize its nothing bad but when the guy is in ur class and u see him all the time and he looks at you like you don't matter its not the best feeling I rea;lize three days isnt bad I'm also saying tht I wasn't rele hurt by that just wrote it in my poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


so he only ignored you for 3 days? my friend's boyfriend ignored her for 2 weeks. i get it, your hurt but sorry to say, isn't that an overreaction because a couple doesn't have to be together ALL the time?

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

wow its an amazing poem and i feel bad that you went through that...i know that he was being a jerk and i wish i could take back a lot... its just sad to say that your friend was b***h when it was happening... im so sorry... :(

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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