Hushed Voices

Hushed Voices

A Poem by paradise

Lost Voices who's whispers have been hushed
You have been treated so wrong and hurt so much
Lost Voices of beauty who sing day after day
You will feel beautiful somehow someway

Lost Voices who's lives have been ruined by fate
You need to something don't be blinded by hate
Lost Voices who think their words are unspoken
You must sing songs and be awoken

Lost Voices your happy when your all alone
Singing diasaterous songs are all your own
Lost Voices who play with death and lies
Your much more beautiful without that disguise

Lost Voices you kill without a reason why
Yes they hurt you no time to cry
Lost Voices your lucky some have worse than you
You need time and love before you bid them adiue

Lost Voices you are selfish never to care
Sometimes your songs are more for humans to bare
You lead them on never too close to be seen
Making them think your a tagic dream

Lost Voices you trick them bring in their lives
Trying hide yourself being your fairytale disguise
Lost Voices you hide out in dark caves
Never too come close only to gaze

Lost Voices who's tails are what they do
who's dark past haunt every one of you
Lost Voiced who's secrets hide behind their eyes
One day everyone will see and won't they be surprised

© 2011 paradise


Author's Note

paradise
yeah ik its horrible but I thouught why not

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Not horrible! This is wonderful,lovely,and brilliant. You show empathy,compassion,and understanding but at the same time you say Hey your lucky some have it worse than you so be grateful that your not them. It is even better when I read it the second time. You get a 100 from me.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Lol I wasn't its not my favourite I wrote it after a book but I'm glad you liked it :D

Also thank you to angelink I'm glad yopu understood liked it and gave me 100 :P

Posted 13 Years Ago


Not horrible! This is wonderful,lovely,and brilliant. You show empathy,compassion,and understanding but at the same time you say Hey your lucky some have it worse than you so be grateful that your not them. It is even better when I read it the second time. You get a 100 from me.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

well written i like your styleee

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i love it... it says so much in an easy way...and dont ever think your poems are horrible

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is great... kind of a feeling of loneliness but its fantastic!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Its not horrible at all!!! This is great. Its like a poem for the lonely type of piece. This is beautifully inspiring, so don't be so modest. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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