Goodbye Notes

Hmm wrote this a while ago A hard tyme dont feel this way anymore

Dear Reader.
This is my final goodbye
None can helpits my tragic lullaby
I hurt too much I didnt eat
I tried so hard I now admit defeat

I give up this is my sweet sacrafice
I'm walking on thin ice
the razor my friend just hurt my wrists
Just one time i slice and twist

They tried I know
I watched thier show
I fell hard on the floor
Got scared and hurt a red door

Poetry the only thing that kept me sane
turns out lifes an unfair game
People lie friends try teachers cry family dies
Turns out no one heard my cries

I screamed for attention
No one looked

I sarted to run
I never came back
I spread out my wings
But that wasnt part of the pact

they were broken bloody and bruised
Woudn't help me I was used
Iwas malested and no one knew
I cried too much and from there i grew

So I sang myself a Sweet lullaby
It helped me cry to sleep last night
there my razor did its job
And here i am here it throbs

So here i lay
I can feel their dismay
I'm just a stupid girl who played with fate
And hoped death would have an earlier date

This is my final cry
This is the night I will die
Too many times I said goodbye
This is My Final Sweet Lullaby

Goodbye
From The Girl Who Died Inside

Reviews

[Everson Taveras]

Wow. A storm of despair and melancholy reigned this poem with so much force that if this really is a goodbye letter, I'm sorry. I sincerely am, and I pray that the light of hope may shine one you once more, for you truly have a gift not to be ignored, buried or forgotten

[Quentin Moyer]

This is really good! I can relate to this myself! I know how you are feeling in this poem! Very well written I liked it a lot!

[paradise]

Thank you both It is really appreciated