Forgotten Fairytale

Forgotten Fairytale

A Poem by paradise
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i don't believe in fairytales,

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Stupid Fairytale you lied to us all
But now I'm wondering why I took the fall
You told me stories of princes and castles
But trying to keep us was too much of a hastle

Stupid Fairytale I only got lost in a forest
Fairygodmother was nice but father wasn't honest
Had only one shoe and the crown was too tight
My Dress was ruined and the dwarfs gave up a fight

Stupid Fairytale the dragon killed my prince
And being played by the pied piper made me wince
My red cloak was torn ripped to shreads
The wolf haunted me till they got his head

Stupid Fairytale The mermaids were cruel
AndSleeping Beautydidn't get a horse she got a mule
Alice hurt her head when she fell down the hole
And the key to destany didn't fit in the keyhole


Stupid Fairytale Beauty got cheated on by the beast
And Cinderella was allalone waiting for her feast
Thumbalina was too tiny and her love said no
Pinocchio lied too much and dated a hoe

Stupid Fairytale The Tower was too old and fell apart
Stupid Fairytale All That's left is my broken heart
 
-SilentlyBeautiful
 

© 2011 paradise


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paradise
Hope you like it please comment to let me know what you tjhink

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O M G I L.O.V.E this I love it to bits!!! Going in my favs. You incorporated like every fairy tale in it and YES it was accurate! It's poetry you fools who says what's accurate or not all that matters is if you got what you had to say down on paper. :)

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A part of growing up is to realite fairy tales aren't real.
I really enjoyed this poem, the content, the flow of the words - overall awesome! :-D

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

THIS is an "...awwwwwwwww..." moment

Posted 13 Years Ago


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O M G I L.O.V.E this I love it to bits!!! Going in my favs. You incorporated like every fairy tale in it and YES it was accurate! It's poetry you fools who says what's accurate or not all that matters is if you got what you had to say down on paper. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thanks Yousss :P

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is nice

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I like this one:))))))

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

inaccurate

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Added on September 26, 2011
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