Forgotten Exsistance

For all the Hard times in life I can't explain

I feel like I'm fighting,
But who I don't know.
I feel like it's me
and I'm watching the show.

It's hard not easy,
too many desicions to make.
I tried to do it alone,
But all this I can't fake.

I don't want to tell them,
It just hurts me more.
I don't want to answer questions,
'CuzI fall to the floor.

I built up defences,
So no one would see.
The Broken Old Heart
was apart of me.

 

Author's Note

Okay so this was the first poem I posted on Quizilla please don't judge I know it sucks but thisd was one of my first poems I felt i should post it

Reviews

[paradise]

Thank you again I think now I have more confidence in my writing bc every emotion every word is apart of me I will never forget taht I'm happy you understood and enjoyed it.

[Silent Serenity also kn..]

First of all this poem doesn't suck....I really adore it! You allow your readers the gift of your feelings which for some they tend to bottle them up!

Poetry gives us the magic potion of release & to begin to allow others to understand, allow them to feel pain or sadness!

Everyone can write a happy poem but it takes someone strong enough to bare their soul & write something truly from the depths of their soul! You did just that hun....AMAZING work, NEVER short change yourself because you my dear have an amazing talent! From one dark poem writer to another....we bare our souls! Keep it up because you touch so many who read! :)