The Truth Hurts

For I am nothing

Nothing will ever be

I will amount to nothing

Nothing will amount to me

 

I am worthless

Worthless I am

I will never be worth anything

Nothing will ever be worth me

 

I'll cry me tears of impotanity

And drownd in my sorrows "woe is me"

I'll go forward then decline

Because no good thing will ever be mine

 

My heart in no way has any joy

It's full of saddness, hate, and annoyed

The ultimate peace I look for will never be mine.

 

To cut would be an understatement

I need something that will hurt much worse

But if I did these things you would leave me, "of course"

 

You act like I'm stupid, a witch and a fake

But at least I admit when I make a mistake

 

So forever hold your peace...

 

Reviews

[Brandon]

wow this was a very strongly worded poem great work keep it up



100/100

[DamienHino]

Wow you have a way with words, amazing! That allows you to get you point across so beautifully, great job I like it.
"I'll cry me tears of impotanity
And drownd in my sorrows "woe is me"
I'll go forward then decline
Because no good thing will ever be mine" so sad but i've felt that. P.S. should the last line be "your" peace.

[R E Tree]

I am worthless
Worthless I am
I will never be worth anything
Nothing will ever be worth me

This stanza is so well put and inspiring. I can relate to this as I find life difficult to make friends. I am not worth much to anyone either which makes me feel empty too. I have very little friends and very little family. Somebody so true is what I really need to cheer me up. Someone to let the sun shine in my life and clear away the rain.