Absence

Absence

A Poem by Samantha.

 

i hear your voice

but i don't see you

your either gone or transparent

i can just see right through

 

your absent from my life

im so confused

your cutting through me like a knife

i feel so abused

 

so please reappear

and show me the love

call me my dear

because together we're as tight as a glove

© 2008 Samantha.


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You put an unexpected turn in the last stanza I found refreshing. Rather than being a poem about lost love, it becomes one about keeping love. Makes for a much better theme.

Great job.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on November 14, 2008

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Samantha.
Samantha.

Wasilla, AK



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