Did you...she did

Did you...she did

A Poem by Samantha.

Did you hug her?

Did you love her?

Did you want her with all you heart?

Did you need her approval to do anything?

Did you love and cherish every moment with her

Did you want her to stay by your side until the sunrise?

Did you do anything just for her?

Did you tell her your deepest secrets?

Did you trust her with your heart?

Or did you just like her face

Did you tell her she was amazing inside and out

Did you say that’s my girl even when she didn’t look her best?

Did you love her like no other?

 

Because she……

Hugged you

She loved you

She wanted you with all her heart

She needed your approval to do anything

She loved and cherished every moment with you

She would stay by you until the sunrise

She did anything just for you

She told you her deepest secrets

She trusted you with her heart

She liked you for more than your looks

She told you, you were amazing inside and out

She said that’s my man even when you didn’t look your best

And she…..

Loved you like no other

 

© 2008 Samantha.


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Wow, I dont know why but i really really like this, good job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Hello there, This was an exalent read. There is one thing. You might want to relook upon. When ever you say "you" and "her" together might I sugest using a comma to help the reader so they wont get lost in te read.

Well please dont hate me for my review.

Thank you S.D.Blankenship the GOTHICCOWBOY

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Samantha.

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