Smile

Every day,

though it seems so far away,

Greets with a depressing demeanor;

and as I rise,

forever trifled from surprise,

I gloomily arise,

rising.

And as I see your eyes,

I once again believe- brought back to my childhood,

sheer happiness

All within your smile.

Reviews

[☮Alpenglow]

Very nice poem... Ah, young love. Perhaps remove 'rising' as it seems repetitive... Keep writing!