Dance of a Broken Heart (Pt.1)

I'm making a poem story kinda thing with this so yeah, this is pt. 1.

Heart skips

Dress rips

See the boy

You've liked forever

Falling over nothing

Everybody laughs

Waiting for you again,

To take another crash

Dance floor's quiet

There's no riot

All eyes are on you

A new Attention

Better left unmentioned

All eyes on you

It's cruel

He sees you

You see him

In his arms, another girl

You were together

He said forever

And now, you're left alone.

The tears splash 

But there's no crash

The graceless fall is through

You don't stumble

You don't fall

You exit the dance

You're through

Tears stream

A wicked gleam 

You saw in the woman's eye

You knew at once,

Your heart was shot

You feel you're gonna die.

Reviews

[Rye]

nice imagery and rhythm, enjoyed your write. nicely written

[WhiteWolf]

Thank you so much! :)

[Rye]

no problem