Forget My Name

just a little something

 

I am going without a sound

To a place without a name.

Where the sun is always shinning

And the song is never in vain.

I go to the places uncharted

Where the maps have not yet been made

For no one who has gone to visit

Has ever been back again.

I’m packing my bags tomorrow

To leave this all behind.

Forget my name when I’m gone

For you won’t see me by your side.

I need to make this journey

For me to be alright.

So do not cry tears of sadness

Or remember my in the light.

Forgot you ever saw me

And forget you ever knew

The girl without a name.

For I will leave this time tomorrow

And that will be the end

Of me.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[RastaChiko™]

This had been added to my library for a while. I read it over today and remembered why I added it. I freaking love this piece.

[Dalaina Renee]

I liked it! I wish I could move!!

[Michael X]

nana.. to go to a place without a sound.. your words paint a portrtait of the broken heart
and solace entwining as one, though to forget your name would bring one out of existance ..
for to have no name would mean no identity.. the eternally forgotten set adrift within their

own confines..a design of soul's own making.. when seeking what it means to truly feel alive
and by losing all in one word, memories have a way of fading into eternal darkness withought
the light of love.. when no one is there to rememeber who you were..the girl without a name

You have an awsome way with words and they flow directly from your talented pen unbound.

[These Haunted Hallways]

Loved it! Sad, but an extremely powerful message it has. I can relate, too. Beautiful. *Hugs*

B.A.

[Janice Ann]

Absolutely awesome! My favorite part is Forget my name when I am gone, for you won't see me by your side." I just love the beauty your describe about this place, and the sadness of leaving! FANTASTIC!

Janice Ann

[Rin]

Hmm... this kind of makes me think of a teenager going off to live on their own and she is like leaving her family. Or mabye lovers parting.

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Wow, this poem is fantastic. It flows wonderfully and you did a great job writing this. Nice work!!!

Heather

[V. K. Harris]

Sometimes I wish I could go there too, Great write.

[Sean M. Addams]

very interesting piece love the imagery you have put into this...very good flow... nice job on this one!