Follow me Love

something out of the corner of my mind

Follow me love
Down a road not trodden.
To paths unseen
To places untold.
There is no danger here
Just a gentle dream.
So go to sleep love
So you don't see the darkness in me.
I will protect you.
But do not look too deep love.
For a darkness resides there you wish not to see.
So turn away love
And follow me no more.

Author's Note

something random. Tell me your thoughts

Reviews

[Travis Wilson]

wow im not sure what to think . i like the flow of the peom and how it can bring out some great emotion but at the same time i think it needs something more im not sure what it is but it needs it.
other then that i thought it was a good poem.

powerful and wonderful shift.

To ask someone you love to leave you. More powerful and selfless.

Good form, good format, well presented mood setting and well painted imagery.

A good piece.

[JLMatthews]

I like it, but its not as memorable as some of yours that I've read. I really like it though- tha darkness thing is cool.

[These Haunted Hallways]

Yea, very well said! Some things are best to keep hidden for the better. Great Job!

B.A.

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Mmm, this is an interesting and nicely written poem. I like it. Great write!!!

Heather

[Tamme]

The darkness still has a heart. Enough to push someone away than drag them in. I like it.

[V. K. Harris]

In love with what is unknown, Powerful read, Nicely written.

[Sean M. Addams]

very sad piece .... like the thoughts you displayed in this... great job ... a very moving and emotion poem.

[NJ Schneider]

Well, I already told you what I thought on your blog.

Not great.