I Hate You

just a little something

 

I truly hate you.

I hate remembering the way you hurt me.

I hate that you won’t even talk to me anymore.

I hate remembering

All those stupid things we used to do together.

I hate you used to tell me one thing

But mean the other.

I hated the fact that you made me believe you

When I see now that you were clearly lying.

I hate that you not only hurt me,

But you hurt others as well.

And what I hate most of all

Is that for some reason I still love you.

Author's Note

Based off something I'm going through- a long story at best but I felt the need to write it

Reviews

[ah]

This is a REALLY good writing. I definitely was not expecting to read the last line. You threw me off and caught me off guard. That is a great write.

[Janice Ann]

Man Have I been there! Great writing, with a rawness that really shines through!

Great job!
Janice Ann

[Red_Queen]

Great. I Loved this poem (yeah i know ironic) but really it was a great piece.
I didn't find anything wrong with it.
It is completly raw and that is how all the best poems are pure ore of emotion dug out from the mines of our souls. I loved it.

[Winston Goop]

Relationships are difficult. Why go through them in the first place? That's always been my philosophy.

(And I wonder why I'm so lonely!)

Great poem. It was a bit clich� in areas, but that's not always bad.

[Joseph - Michael]

And you wrote it just about right. You wrote the long short just nicely done. I hate my ex so much that she had hurt me too many times, yet I still love her anyway. I don't know why, but I guess it's because she happen to be my son's mother...

Anyway, it's a good writing, so no worries...

[Rin]

Oooh I like that last line. It's kind of like you try to... for the sense of it hate because you should but your strong feelings won't allow you. I like how this poem shows that emotions can't always be controlled. Nicely done!

[PhoeniX]

something i can't stand going through myself. a piece that feels as though it needs to be shared with the person who was hated upon. well done

[DragonWolf]

I hate that you are going through it, but unfortunately it seems that most of us encounter someone like that in our lives. Someone that can make us hate AND love them at the same time. I hope that you will find someone that you can love and that can love you back. :)

[Chloe]

Yeah, I see that this is current. It seems like it was a sudden burst that just came out. It also seems like the kind of poem that you would like to show to the person that this is written about, but you know that you're scared. You displayed the loathing addiction of this person very well. Great work. Kudos.

[Ricohard]

Truth. Possibly use symbols of why you hate him so much.