I'm Fine

Just something I put together

 

Don’t let me think tonight dear

Or nothing will be alright.

Don’t let me have one last dream

Or else I fear I will never wake up.

I am stuck on this edge

And I fear I am about to fall.

All hope is gone

And nothing holds me up.

My will is growing weary

As day by day I push myself to the edge.

How long will I continue

In this alternate reality?

With a fake smile plastered on my face

As I repeat over and over again

The same horrible lie.

‘I’m fine’

Author's Note

Tell me what you think

Reviews

[V. K. Harris]

Very sad and intense, great emotions. Excellent write.

[Amor-de-angel]

Im sure we all say this far too much,I know I do. Maybe we should stand out and say 'well I'm not make me feel better'.

[Ember]

I've felt this way on countless occasions, and I really like the writing style. Easily understood, with it's clear message, well written (as previously stated by other readers).. I like it. Good job Nana.. But you seem really down lately, feel better, okay?

[PhoeniX]

such an over used word. it always masks up when we're truly down. what a white lie that everyone has said before. a great piece. great job

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

"As I repeat over and over again
The same horrible lie.
'I'm fine'"

Yeah, I do this alot. This is a great poem and I feel like it was written just for me. Nice work!!!

Heather

[Yaooooooo]

Very well written.
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Thanks for sharing...
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