Morning Bird

All I have to say is thank you Caine for the the bird pictures. They for some reason have inspired me.

 

Sweet little morning bird

Flies the skies alone.

Singing his song

So far away from home.

He is so blue

He is so true

Yet no one seems to love him

Like he wants them too.

Poor little blue bird

Always sits alone

Never really resting

Never really home.

Poor little blue bird

Sing for me again.

I will love you dearly

I will be a friend.

Sweet morning bird

Forgotten by the world.

Singing your song

Hoping to be heard.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think. This is part two of my bird poems

Reviews

[Edward Clay]

now this i really like. there's a sweet and lonely innocence here,that is sad to view, but beautiful to admire. this flows, almost delicately. it's the satin sheets and the bed time whisper type of feel. reminds me of the poems of edward monkton a tiny bit.

i wish i was a morning bird. very nicely written.

[*~Poetic_Essence~*]

I think that its good that you can be inspried by a picture..good writers are very versatile and can write about a majority of things..but back to the poem..I love that it flowed well it made it easy to read..I also like the fact that you expressed how alone the poor blue bird was and that you offered to befriend the creature..I think that shows alot about your character in this piece..I really enjoyed the read..thanks for asking me to read it...
Well From One Word-Play Poet To The Next...Always Remember To Write With Your Heart!

s~Shanty~s

[NJ Schneider]

*smiles* Glad I could help. They are the cutest birds EVER. I loved the flow of this one. Nice.