In Return

Another one

 

Forgotten Promises

And cold lies

Were all you had to give

I gave you my heart

Though you took it

You never gave me anything

And you left me bereft

Alone

Without your heart

Or mine

And I cry

Without comfort

Without hope

I get no justice

My soul has been damaged

And marred beyond repair

For I gave everything

And got nothing in return

Reviews

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Very moving and lonely write. The pain of unrequited love is tremendously unbearable. Like you become frozen, but just want to know the truth. Then again, the real truth is what makes you want to die more as well. This was full of feeling and emotion. I loved it a lot! Very well penned!

Mikey

[S.L.Drake]

Quite easily understood;which I think is a good thing,especially in this poem.A sad,sorry state of affairs when this happens,but that is a part of life in this world.I think you were simply eloquent in this poem of few words,and to the point meaning.

S.L.Drake

[Amor-de-angel]

Nicely expressed. Love sure sucks..

[NJ Schneider]

Uhg, Ain't that the truth? Some guys... I'm tellin' ya, they can be such jerk-faces. And I know what you mean, lol you know I do.

[Requiem]

Well, I haven't been able to figure out how to use the notes thingy so no worries on that end. And well, I found no spelling errors... grammar no clue about. Since my own grammar is atrocious, if it wasn't for spellcheck... Anywho. I see a tad bit of unrequited love in here... but it seems more of being use and thrown away later on. Very touching and sad. Great job on it.

[V. K. Harris]

Very Dark and Sad, Though Beautiful at once....