With You

I love this poem and I still feel this way about the one I love

 

Gently you pull me

Like lapping wave

That draws me deeper into the dark sea

Where I find myself surrounded by my thoughts of you

And you hold me to you with gentle warmth

That makes me feel

Maybe things will be alright.

Our lips meet in the middle

And I melt into a heaven

I have never seen before.

I am yours

And you are mine

Tantalizing senses push us

Like a strong current

But we hold strong

And I look at you

To find you are looking at me

Always the same

Always with you

I hope the ocean never lets us go

Reviews

[NJ Schneider]

Why is it that your sad poems make me happy and your happy ones do the opposite? OH RIGHT. Cuz I don't have someone. lol. And you are crazy, my poems aren't that great. And not NEARLY as good as yours. But, thought it made me sad, I still liked it. =^.^=

[*~Poetic_Essence~*]

Wow is all that i can say..lol..i can relate to this so well..i love the picture up there as well i think it fits..and its cute..you use vivid describing words..it makes it easy for me to follow and visual what you are trying to say..
"Our lips meet in the middle
And I melt into a heaven
I have never seen before."

[QuillandInkWhispers]

Aww this is so beautiful and it's a wonderful poem. Love it. :)

[A. L. Robinson]

Lovely piece!

[S. P. Vaporis]

this has rippling feeling that i think fit the poem perfectly. very enjoyable read. ~peace~

[Kimberly Tickle ~~~ Dia..]

"I hope the ocean never lets us go".......I really love this line....It seems so passionate...Great work....

~~~~~Kimberly Tickle~~~~Diamonds Of Life

[Shelly Wiseberg]

I liked this poem alot, its passionate, romantic, heartfelt, and lovely

[Emily B]

This really is beautiful. Very moving.

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Wow! Very beautiful imagery you've presented here; incredibly moving :)

Mikey

[V. K. Harris]

I love it, Its Beautiful as always..