Fear

The poem is simply what the title says fear but it has a twist...

Fear

The shrill screams of tear,

Excite me,

As I cause them to fear me.

 

I enjoy,

Watching their eyes twitch from side to side,

Their mind playing games,

Making them see illusions.

 

I love Hearing them promise themselves,

That there is nothing to fear,

When they already fear me.

 

It thrills me when they face up to me,

Trying for once to fight their fears.

 

Their fears make me stronger,

Their small cries for help make me bigger,

Until I become too strong for them to defeat.

 

Who Am I you ask?

Why My Dear Child,

I AM YOUR FEAR!!!!

Author's Note

Please comment and tell me what you think.

Reviews

[samantha]

very well done and exspressed so well

[Christopher.Holmberg]

You expressed much emotion throughout this piece , well done , i enjoyed this composition :)

[deeps]

Whoa! So truthful, raw!
Love the emotion and pic you used in this.
Very well written and expressed!