The Thorns in Death

A Vampire Poem. Its about A Vampire getting revenge for a challenge on another site!

 

 

The lifeless body at my feet,

Sent no emotion of grief,

Or sorrow,

To my dead cold heart.

 

The stains of blood,

On my young,

Ageless hands,

Made me feel no sorrow,

For the boy at my feet.

 

His open eyes,

Even though now dead,

Saw the true me,

That no other mortal could,

He saw the dead,

Cold murderer,

That lay behind my Ageless,

Yet beautiful face,

He knew of the sharp canine teeth,

Which were a lot like fangs.

 

He knew what I was,

And yet he was the one who made me like this,

He didn’t exactly transform me,

But he was the one, who made a way for it,

He was the one, who killed me in the first place,

Taking my mortality,

And allowing me to become immortal,

Damn Him!

Damn everything I have Became!

Damn It All!

 

Author's Note

Please comment and tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Magdelena]

Nice and well expressed! I think this can be turned into a book of sorts.. The starting part on how the persona became the way they did, then moveing on to the plot and story.. You do horror so well!!!

Mags xx

[deeps]

I like it, I like the content very well,
I love the last 5 lines here, This is well written!
Like the imagery as well.