The Thoughts of Suicide

Is what the title says a guys thoughts on suicide. It was for a challenge on another site

Death it calls me,

The storm outside is louder than Death,

But I can still hear it clearly.

 

Preparations running through my mind,

How should I do it?

An overdose of Tylone,

A cold bladed knife,

A silent pistol,

Or the old classic way,

A thick piece of rope?

 

That was easy enough to choose,

And yet still to do the deed,

Looping the rope around my neck,

I question what would happen if it doesn’t work,

Will my wife leave me?

Will my children hate me?

Will my parents disown me?

 

I didn’t want to think about it,

But as my air supply gets cut off,

I wish them all farewell,

I have the note written and everything,

They didn’t need me to bring more pain to them.

 

Goodbye my love,

I really truly love you.

Goodbye my children,

I wish you the best in life.

Goodbye Mother,

Who taught me to be caring and compassionate.

Goodbye Father,

The man who was my role model, my hero.

 

Damn it,

Yes I will say it,

Goodbye Cruel World.

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Michael X]

suicide is such a flexibel, touchy subject, after watching "the bridge" on google video, it accured to me that. i have no opinion on the subject per say, i mean everyone is going to die one day, if someone chooses to take their own life, i have yet to develop an opinion, i am sure everyone has had these thoughts in one way or another, maybe not to this degree, but this is certainly a topic to get the reader thinking. it is the epitomy of understanding the nature of living and dying. i believe you did a brilliant job. i look forward to reading more from you.