New Life

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Dawn to Dawn,

And Dusk to Dusk.

A new beginning in every moment of time.

 

Every moment a fresh start,

 to earn our crowns.

 

For as the sky broke,

And it was declared that it was done.

 

Our humane flesh was shed,

And our slates were cleaned.

 

We were made new,

In the eyes of the king.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Jenny Nelson]

I think you put a lot of meaning into a few words. Very good.