The Best Pain In The World

The Best Pain In The World

A Poem by SomewhereInNeverland
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The pain you feel when you have fallen for someone.

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The ache in your chest is comforting, yet wrenching,
It reminds you of all the good times,
And the fact that if they left, vanished without a trace,
You would never be able to pick up the pieces of your heart, soul and life.

They are your world, your focus,
They are the one person that can instantly change your mood,
The make you smile and giggle, with no effort,
Because they simply are everything to you.

They envelop your mind, and is all you see when you close your eyes,
You relate songs, or pictures or places to them, as it reminds you of their qualities that you fell in love with,
All of this solidifies the feelings you have, and it fills you with joy to say,
'This is the best pain in the world, it shows I'm alive and loved'.

© 2013 SomewhereInNeverland


Author's Note

SomewhereInNeverland
Sorry if it's crap, I'm in a soppy mood.

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It's neither crappy nor soppy despite your mood. It is beautiful and precious as the ache in your chest is one of love and remembrance, which can be nostalgic and even melancholy, but not crappy or soppy. Very nice write for being in a soppy mood ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

SomewhereInNeverland

11 Years Ago

Thanks! :)



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Nicely written. Sometimes it's the worst pain possible.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

SomewhereInNeverland

11 Years Ago

Thanks, and it definitely can be.
It's neither crappy nor soppy despite your mood. It is beautiful and precious as the ache in your chest is one of love and remembrance, which can be nostalgic and even melancholy, but not crappy or soppy. Very nice write for being in a soppy mood ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

SomewhereInNeverland

11 Years Ago

Thanks! :)
A splendid read and write...Bravo...............

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

Call the neighbors , they might give you some...lol
SomewhereInNeverland

11 Years Ago

Sadly not. Right, I'm going to bed. Night!
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

Good night...:)................
I like it. :) its beautiful

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SomewhereInNeverland

11 Years Ago

Thanks. :)

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