Barry

Barry

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I thought I could handle it, I thought I had control
When I saw you coffin, I did crumble, I did fold.
For it was not just your death that tore us a part

It was the loss of promise and hope, just like a false start

We walk behind you, face puffy, stained with tears

Mind dances and rolls with memories that hurt 

The tolling bell cuts deep as the moment nears

For today we bury you as well as our hearts

© 2010 Fool


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. i'm very sorry for your loss ... and this ode is beautifully poignant and poignantly beautiful ...


Posted 14 Years Ago


oh such a beautiful lil piece. S**t, it's very moving.

Posted 14 Years Ago


So sad and deep

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very profound, Barry you have captured the pains and hurt of the human heart as it experiences loss.

regards,
Vincent

Posted 14 Years Ago



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