Chaos Control

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Craving a soul to create a word with me and become the world,

Not dependency of love, without retreat; an animals bond of touch,

Hope of acceleration of making better future memories to a be caught in absolute NOW,

Surrendered pain to become full of trace insanity from others views.

Never the thought of settling or the love at first sight cliche,

To be silent with "friends" and demean ourselves with their best but we seeing nothing,

Delirium is close but the acceptance is close to what we're going for,

Without Ego's walking on red coal road but to not imagine but become imagination.

Not thinking of future because there is no such thing,

The eternity of a two circles and a tangent is this word,

This gives us the presence to make comedians cry and depressed laugh,

It's bigger than us this word and yet the sheer subtlety will have the universe quake.

Without mystery or knowledge,

We guide judging the rest our body's,

Separated yet same.

Reviews

[Elisam]

Karl I really like this, I feel like it's an insight in to how love looks when you let your imagination free.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I feel like i should review since you have no reviews and i have a read request for this poem.
I didnt really understand it to be honest.
It didnt rhyme well i didnt like it much.
When i get time ill take a look at the rest of your work though and leave my honest opinion :)