Favorite Explosion

Um... yeah...?

[Set me off.]
I'll be your favorite explosion.
One you can't control.

[Ignite the flame.]
Are you ready to set me off?
You won't forget me.

Reviews

[Patricia(:]

I really like this poem, it's actually really good! I like the title- attracts the reader(: The picture you put with it makes the poem even better somehow, if that makes sense..I can only wonder where you got the idea to write such a magnificent poem.Ah well if I could I'd give it a 200 :D

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Takes a hero to keep up.
I like it a lot.

[aloha.]

simple. short. but a lot of meaning.
i love this. (:

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[Eric Cox]

Nicely done, we'd all like to be set off from time to time, I think.

[alesuriko]

Such a short poem but so incredibly adorable and attracting. I loved the picture, really quite cute. The speaker of the poem... in my mind they have this cocky kind of sultry quality about their voice, tempting yet satirical. I really enjoyed this poem and rereading it in my mind is quite entertaining. Well done!

[Michael X]

this is crerative, it's a party poem, has zest and feature and color,
snesuous fun and passion, the layout brings your words to life,
genuinely crafty, i enjoyed the simplicity of the wording as well.
its passionate and really brings the reader into the moment
the way you ask the question defines the meaning,
this is awsome, i really liked the overall feeling and design

[Aven]

I like the name alot, it reminds me of something...I wonder what happens when someone sets you off for real? I'm not quite sure what it means, but I like it alot.

Oh! maybe you try to convey that even though someone close is furious at you, you can't help but to love them? I'm just speculating. :)