Very cute and sweet this poem is! I love the structure and the accompanying picture, very suiting. It has such a flippant and whimsical atmosphere about it, as though you're floating and bouncing around the poem while reading it which is thoroughly enjoyable. Well written!
Very cute and sweet this poem is! I love the structure and the accompanying picture, very suiting. It has such a flippant and whimsical atmosphere about it, as though you're floating and bouncing around the poem while reading it which is thoroughly enjoyable. Well written!
beautiful, and well written artistic, and the form creates the feelling imo,
the fluttering effect, the imesg of butterflies play well into the romantic
theme as well as the classic emotion of nervousness in such ways
the reader can't help but feel the excited emotional implication
and the over design, brilliantly conceptualized work, keep it up!
Aw... so cute and sweet. I would switch flittering continuous to continuous flittering, unless you were going for an unbalanced affect to explain the butterflies in your stomach.