Fill. Flutter. Fly.
A Poem by
FocusedAmnesia
"MUSIC. The only air I breath." Dan Arnold.
Music fills my mind; fluttering melodies, flying words. And you, for a sweet moment, disappear.
© 2012 FocusedAmnesia
Reviews
this flows just like music itself :) (great choice for the picture btw)
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Music can do many things...
Posted 14 Years Ago
Music can do many things...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
absolutely
Posted 14 Years Ago
absolutely
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
it's so short and such an intriguing poem! i can't stop reading it!! haha. LOVE IT!
Posted 14 Years Ago
it's so short and such an intriguing poem! i can't stop reading it!! haha. LOVE IT!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
You've done quite a lot here... the second line tells the story. Very nice!
Kerplunk... right into the favorites folder.
Posted 14 Years Ago
You've done quite a lot here... the second line tells the story. Very nice!
Kerplunk... right into the favorites folder.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
how delightfully curious~ indeed inside of the body of music there is more comfort to be had sometimes than within human arms~
a smooth poetic flow~
Posted 14 Years Ago
how delightfully curious~ indeed inside of the body of music there is more comfort to be had sometimes than within human arms~
a smooth poetic flow~
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Beautiful write about one of my favoritie things.......
Peace
Robin
Posted 14 Years Ago
Beautiful write about one of my favoritie things.......
Peace
Robin
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Incredible
music is our escape
i love this moment that you captured. i can relate so well to it.
you should check out my poem flawless potential.
i bet you would appreciate it! it was inspired by a talented musician
Posted 14 Years Ago
Incredible
music is our escape
i love this moment that you captured. i can relate so well to it.
you should check out my poem flawless potential.
i bet you would appreciate it! it was inspired by a talented musician
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Loved this... simple, concise, and says so much all the same. Ambiguous with enough to relate to as to give a moment or two for thought. Perfect proportions. :)
Great piece!
Posted 14 Years Ago
Loved this... simple, concise, and says so much all the same. Ambiguous with enough to relate to as to give a moment or two for thought. Perfect proportions. :)
Great piece!
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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