Perfect Imperfection

Perfect Imperfection

A Poem by FocusedAmnesia
"

It is what it is. You are who you are. Change for yourself.

"
Perfect.

Different from you.
Talked about because of it,
And could not care less.

Fearless.

Do my own thing.
Enjoy every little bit,
Of who I am.

Eternal.

I am me.
Something that won't ever cease to change,
Me for you.

Imperfection.
Embrace it.
Love it.
Be.

© 2010 FocusedAmnesia


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Impressive. Love yourself, be yourself and be proud of yourself...a very positive message. Don't change to make someone else happy, it never works and you, yourself won't be happy. No one's perfect, embrace yourself in your imperfections and always accept others for who they are. Outstanding poem and very well written.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Great poem. The oxymoron in you title got my attention. Anyway I really enjoyed reading this.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Perfection is an idea we conjured me at the dawn of time it seems, but it has evolved so much in the 20th century and continues to grow.
My pen name is FlawedByDesign, because I believe that we are all just that, so when you say "Perfect Imperfection" it reinforces that. If there is any imperfection to be found in our lives, it is in being imperfect.

Nicely done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful poem. Your really good.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Impressive. Love yourself, be yourself and be proud of yourself...a very positive message. Don't change to make someone else happy, it never works and you, yourself won't be happy. No one's perfect, embrace yourself in your imperfections and always accept others for who they are. Outstanding poem and very well written.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this describes my persona in high school

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is quite cute in its small way and yet says so much. I like how it went from rejecting perfection to embracing imperfection because no one is perfect.

Precise words in a neat order into a wonderful message I think many people can ultamately relate to this especailly me.

I don't know why people talk about flaws when everyone has them. That always puzzles me so if people talk to me or about me, I'm completely oblivious to it.

I complemnt you dearly for sharing this. I loved every part of it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

perfect is non-existant among humans. good read

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

perfect imperfection...a contagious,thought provoking title and poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a very thoughtful/philosophical poem-
love the imperfection verse...
"Embrace it.
Love it.
Be."
truth in poetry-love it!!!:)


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i love this, very empowering

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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