My love

I have a girl in my class who I like but I'm too nervous to say anything so I've wrote it as a poem. Any ideas on how to tell her

My heart took flight

The moment I saw you

But I didn't have the heart 

To call you

I now write this poem

With passion

For you.

Author's Note

I didn't mention her name because I don't know if she'd want me to.

Reviews

[Elaine]

you think too lowly of yourself it seems. Women typically love poetry - so why not share a poem with her, writing something pleasant you observe about her, without it being too vulnerable or overwhelming. I think anyone would be moved by that - or at least intrigued enough to want to know more about you!
Good luck!

[Fnaf fan]

Thank you a lot! This really helps me!

[Marrissa cardello]

I don't know much about poetry or love, but I think she'll like it. The only thing you have to lose is your dignity, so take a chance! People like poetry, so you might be surprised by her reaction.

[Fnaf fan]

Thanks a lot Marrissa this made my day!

[Breanna M]

Do you still see her in the halls? Or talk to her at all? I hoped everything worked out as you wished it would :)

[Lisasview]

Hi there,
Spend more time developing your actual feelings and writing them down...
Much of this is good but it needs more.
You might like reading one of mine "Miles Apart"
All my best,
Lisa, now in Spain

[Gee]

Just blurt it out, better to open up and see if she feels the same rather than spend your time wondering :))

[cheyenne s garcia]

This is a beautiful writing. I enjoyed it. Well done. - Cheyenne

[poetgurl]

awww, what a cute little write, nicely said