The Lonely Sun

Well , this is my first poem . I enjoy writing but I don't really have the opportunity to do so. Correct me if I'm wrong. Thank you.

The Lonely And Lost Sun

I am the brightest of all the colors,

Yet I am just a shadow within the darkness,

Have you ever feel my heart?

No, you can't cause it is empty just like the dessert.

I need space, let me have it please.

Give me time, I need it to refill my empty and lost heart,

To be the Augustus of Rome back,

I was wrong, I thought I was perfect,

Yet I am just a fool with wings that cant fly

Even with the Sands of Time I am still me

The Lonely and Lost Sun

Author's Note

Correct my grammar problems please and I need an honest feedback :)