Day And Night

Lover's forever.....

The dawn breaks in with a shimmering light

The sun peeks out with a smile so bright

That you miss the tears that she hides

Behind that happiness, sadness resides

She smile all day, she seems alright

No one knows what she fights

That light seems like a positive ray

So easily you are duped by the DAY!

         

But  as time rushes through sand glass hour

When sun seems closer, day seems far

For moments the lovers meet in twilight

For moments the DAY touches the NIGHT!

Then sets the sun, gone is the light

A sea of blue is now darkness of night

But once again, by beauty you are fooled

The rage of tears, by moon is cooled

The stars twinkle, he seems alright

No one knows, what he fights

Seems like spells of laughter, those twinkling whites

So easily you are duped by the night

But soon the light engulfs his darkness

Soon his darkness shields her light

For moments the lovers meet in Dawn

They unite once again to be TORN!!!

Author's Note

I guess broken things inspire me to write! ;p So here's a piece about Day and Night as Broken Lovers! Would love to know your thoughts on this one!

Reviews

[africa]

Great rhyming and the telling of a sweet little tale of the night.

[Flutterby aish]

Thanks :)

[africa]

That's alright

[Rainslover]

The way you put things are beautiful! You have mastered that art- the way of making things beautiful and yet that pain reflecting! Liked the way how you connected sun and moon with broken lovers! Great imagination you have got!

[Flutterby aish]

Thank you sooo much. :) glad you liked it!

[SleeplessVolcano]

I love how the picture you posted reflects in the poem......it adds another level of artistry, and it something I try to do too, but I use actual paintings, because they then to convey deeper meaning than pictures....

And indeed....we are so easily duped by the night! I am writing a proposal to God to let the sun shine permanently......:)

[Flutterby aish]

:D Thankyou for reviewing!

[beautiful dreamer]

quick typo fix: Smiles* :) i love this so much! your personification is impeccable i would never had gotten it if it werent for the picture! i love how you did that! keep up the good work!

[Flutterby aish]

:D Thank you

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and words.
"But soon the light engulfs his darkness
Soon his darkness shields her light
For moments the lovers meet in Dawn
They unite once again to be TORN!!!"
The light and the darkness are like lovers meeting in a secret place. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Flutterby aish]

Thank you for your kind words!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[ANTO]

A unique take - the Sun is almost always portrayed as happy et al - ergo 'sunny disposition' so it was refreshingly new to me to read of it as sad under all that shiny brightness. I love new ways of looking at things - thank you for this
Ditto for the two 'lovers' meeting at dusk and dawn - Im fast becoming a fan of Flutterby Aish

[Flutterby aish]

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.