Hey! Mystery Boy

Going sinister with the season! :p

Wearing a black cape and your head bent low,

Walking in the rain which has no effect on you,

A dark and sinister aura you create,

Still there's an urge to look at your face,

As you you walk down towards me, there's something about you,

Something that I know of, still I feel it's new,

Gently you walk towards me but my heart races fast

Finally you stop, my heart too comes to a halt!

I know now's the time, you'll reveal your true side,

I know now's the time, you'll show me what you hide,

As your hands move, towards the hood of your cape,

An irresistible urge in my heart takes place,

You hold your hood and look up, to face me,

I take a deep breath, now the secret will be revealed,

The mystery that had been haunting me every night,

A question lurking in my head, "Within the hood who lies?"

In the darkness, I try to look into your eyes,

My eyes grow wide as I see what lies,

Two hungry blood shot eyes stare from beneath,

Although I can't see but I know you're smiling at me,

Tonight I'm the one whose caught in your trap,

The girl who'll kill the desire of your heart,

You are the predator and the prey is me,

Another girl, another night, tonight your meal is me! 

Author's Note

The girl dreams every night of a guy wearing a hood but can never see his face.....finally tonight the mystery boy reveals his identity but somehow.....this was not how the girl imagined it to be!!!
So guys what do you think??????

Reviews

[Mirror]

Reading this gives a good feeling of curiosity. Definitely a plus.

Keep up the good work. Keep writing.

[Flutterby aish]

This was an old work, Makes me laugh now. Hahaa. Thank you for reviewing though!

[junaid altaf]

well i was reading it like an innocent child and in the end it frightened me................
but it was really good..............

[Flutterby aish]

Hahaha......Thnx!!!!

[Vikrantsingh]

This is wonderful imagination you carry FA, Well I loved your way of expressing your poem.
This is marvelous :)
Keep sharing :)
Cheers!
Singh :)

[Flutterby aish]

Thanx!

[Sami Khalil]

I like this one too...Thank you for sharing...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting and scary tale. I like the way you led the reader to the good ending with no fear and accepting the ending. I like the artwork. You gave life to your words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Flutterby aish]

Thank you !!

[sparkle]

really good work , love it :)

[Flutterby aish]

Thank you!

[Zelle]

ohh wow! i enjoyed it thoroughly! thumbs up! :)

[Flutterby aish]

Thank you!!

[MandaBear]

It was intense lol I really liked it a lot!

[Flutterby aish]

Thnx for the review!

[Shaun Payton]

That was cool. Like the big bad wolf of hell came along.

[Flutterby aish]

haha....yup! thnx for reviewing!

[Shaun Payton]

Welcome!:)

[Aehr]

Ooohh... I loved the story you told through the poem. Intriguing. :) Awesome write as always :D

[Flutterby aish]

:) Thnx gurl!

[Aehr]

anytime sista :*