I Miss You

Hey bestie......Where are you now????

As I walk on the road all alone 

I am reminded of those times

When you and I used to walk together

And live the best out of our lives

When we used to Laugh together

When we held each other and cried

When people turned their backs on us

But we were always by each other's side

Where are those times now?

Where did those days go?

Where are you my dear friend?

Once again, I'm reminded of you as I walk alone!

Author's Note

This is a short poem i have written for my Best Friend......Rhea yaar...... teri yaad aa rahi hai! Hope she likes it and so do you all!

Reviews

[africa]

Wow this is such an old piece. Seems history is on a repeating loop lol

[Flutterby aish]

Lolz...its pretty old yes...

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad and beautiful poem. When we go to old places. Actions and people are remembered. I like the story in the poem. We do miss people that we held close when they are gone. A sad ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Flutterby aish]

Thnx for reviewing!

[Vikrantsingh]

Oh! My dear friend, You turned my life upside down... We had so much we shared...
It was love and pure divine. We stung We fought, We loved, You taught.
We had special memories when I broke my leg,
You came with few chocolates and flowers for me.
Atlast you us to call me B***h and Use to love you for that :)
Its all what friend can share

Those what came to my mind.

Loved you work dear :)
Singh :)

[Flutterby aish]

Thnx......:)

[Shaun Payton]

I love this piece. Why, because some poems with the I miss you theme go into details at length and endlessly. You put emotion right out in front of the reader, you've defined the feeling of "I miss you" rather than explaining it. That is good work.

[Flutterby aish]

Thank you for reviewing....glad that you liked it!

[Shaun Payton]

You are welcome Flutterby:) I enjoy reading.

[Sami Khalil]

A good poem. Thank you for penning...:)

[Flutterby aish]

Thank you for reviewing!

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[Another Poet]

Aaah tears in my eyes it makes me sad. But beautiful written!

[Flutterby aish]

thnx for reviewing

[Another Poet]

no problem!

[sparkle]

she is a lucky girl enough to have such great friend like you .. great work .. I love it :)

[Flutterby aish]

thnx!

[Aehr]

I'm in tears, sweetheart. This is SO sweet! And trust me, this is your best poem until now in terms of rhyming. :) You're the cutest, sweetest, best-est friend I've ever had with whipped cream and a cherry on top. :D
This one's short, but that's what's most beautiful about it. How you conveyed your feelings to everyone in a few lines is simply remarkable. :) Luvya :*

[Flutterby aish]

luv ya too!

[Aehr]

Sometimes I feel like you're the fraternal twin I never had :P

[Flutterby aish]

hahahahah!!!!!!! True!!!! I feel that way for you n Stuti!

[Aehr]

:)

[Kashif Waqas Ramay]

we all miss our friends... one day or an other,,, good one

[Flutterby aish]

thank you