Vibes

Vibes

A Poem by Trec
"

A poetic description of a song I was listening to. Though it may not seem like that.

"

It’s a burst of-

Electricity!

A shockwave of-

Adrenaline!

A rhythm my heart is beating to…

 

It’s a pattern:

-        -    Unforgettable

-        -    And it repeats

It doesn’t break "

it continues,

it’s a rhythm my heart is beating to…

 

It’s passionate,

and sexual.

It’s depressing,

but it helps you,

Explore

Passionate, depressing " opposites

But opposites attract

It’s a rhythm my heart is beating to…

 

The sensations are strange,

It’s a mixture of complexity and simplicity

Like a deep philosophy.


It’s a rhythm my heart is beating to…

© 2017 Trec


Author's Note

Trec
I would be grateful if you could give me some feedback on its tone and register. Feel free to criticize my technique (it would be helpful).

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