A Piece Of Paper

Like a piece of paper,

Thin,

Breakable.

When you said you'd care for me,

I believed you,

And loved you.

But you let me down.

You broke me,

Completely.

You don't understand the pain I'm feeling,

And you never will.

Would it be better for everyone if I just ended it all?

Reviews

[Relic]

From being here a while on this site I can tell you this is not the first time I've seen someone express so much disappointment, heartache, and sorrow it made them want to check out of this world for a new one. To end all ties with this horrible life and renew everything, starting over again in some other time and place without so much hurt and pain.

It seems everyone experiences this type of agony in their life, especially at a young age, myself included. It puts a weight on your shoulders that's hard to bear. But life doesn't promise everything will go smoothly. Things will happen we hate. Things that keep us frustrated and angry. It's all a part of how life forces us to develop character. And that character is melded and formed by how we react and think.

The hurt formed by another we trusted will always seem impossible to get over. Yet, eventually, we must move on and learn the hard way what to look for in the future. Will we be just as vulnerable and tearable like that paper, or wiser and as stronger from the pain of past lessons? That's a choice we have to make. Our future depends on it. I chose to be stronger.

[Fluffyy]

OH MY GOD thank you so much for taking the time to write such a long comment! Your comment is so inspiring!! It really means a lot to me and yup, I choose to be stronger too!

[Relic]

You're welcome, Fluffyy.